Tuesday, May 25, 2010

NARRATIVE - The Three Extremely Large, Tough Pigs

The Three Extremely Large, Tough Pigs

Orientation: One hot summers day there lived three extremely large, tough pigs who just happened to be professional boxers. There also lived a small, whimpy wolf. They lived in a small city named Treesville. The wolf was so scared of the pigs because they looked so big and scary..

Complication:
The next day when the whimpy wolf woke up, he decided it was time for revenge as he was so sick of being treated with disrespect by the three large pigs. So he got dressed in his grandmas pyjamas, beanie, ugg boots and glasses so the pigs wouldn’t recognise him. Suddenly he heard a loud thump at the door,
“Hello wolf, I hope you are in there” he heard a pigs voice say.
“Nobody’s home” replied the wolf.
This made the pigs really mad, so the three pigs surrounded the house and because they were professional boxers, they punched, kicked and tackled the house down. It didn’t take long and became the new record for breaking into a house.

The pigs were happy with the damage they had done and how they had hurt the wolf as he was now buried beneath the bricks. They went home and gathered food for a picnic. Off they went until the wolf finally escaped from the collapse of bricks. He made his way to the three pigs house. They obviously weren’t very smart as they had left their house unlocked. So the wolf went straight in.

Right inside the front door the whimpy wolf found a cabinet of potions that said, ‘makes you extremely large if you swallow’. The wolf liked being small so he didn’t take the potions, so he decided to destroy them instead. He wasn’t sure how this would affect the pigs but he was not happy about how they kept making him feel.

Resolution: The pigs came home and went straight o bed. The next morning they realised their potions had disappeared. They immediately rushed to the wolfs house assuming that he had stolen them. He opened the door to find three very whimpy looking, small pigs. They weren’t scary looking at all. They then decided that the best way to resolve the issue was to talk through it.

By the end of the day they all agreed that the pigs would build the wolf a new home and while they were making it they would let the wolf live with them for a little while.
They all became friends and took down the Treesville sign and replaced it with a sign that said: ‘Whimpsville – Where all friends big and small live happily together’.

Coda/moral: It doesn’t matter how tall or short, fat or skinny you are it doesn’t give you the right to be mean to anyone.

Author: Anne

Fantastic work Anne - Miss C.

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