In year 6, we are learning about narratives and how to use our creative minds to construct fantastic and unique stories. For our task this week, students were asked to modify a well known fairytale and creative a narrative according to the correct structure. Below are some examples of some very creative and well written narratives. The following narratives were written in a 30 minute session.
Red Hunting Hood
Orientation: Once upon a time there lived Red Hunting Hood and her evil grandma. There was also a nice, innocent wolf. In Spring which is when Red Hunting Hood's grandma gains all of her evil power, the nice wolf was heading through the scary forest going to give his aunt a box of chocolates.
Complication: While the nice wolf was running through the scary forest, a huge tree pulled a root out of the ground and knocked the nice wolf on his head and he went flying backwards off the cliff and landed on a cloud.
He then sat on the cloud and it took him very close to his aunts house. It suddenly started raining gumballs and he caught some of them and put them in with the box of chocolates for his aunt. The clouds started to disintegrate, and the nice wolf fell onto a nail on the ground. He had to go to the Wolfspital and got his bottom bandaged up.
He was fixed up and they said that he should really get some bed rest. He started heading back towards his Aunts house. He got to his Aunts house and red hunting hood was there. He went to give his aunt the chocolates and gumballs when suddenly he turned to find Red Hunting Hood waiting patiently at the door. Suddenly he was eaten by Red Hunting Hood.
Resolution: The wolf was so scared until suddenly he felt himself travelling back up through Red Hunting Hood’s throat. He was then digested, and was surprisingly still alive in one piece. The police were called and Red hunting hood was then arrested and the wolf eventually found his Aunt hidden away in her wardrobe. He explained what happened ot his Aunt and they agreed that it wasn’t a good idea for a small, innocent wolf to be out in the forest on his own every again.
What do you think the moral of this story could be?
Author: Clayton
Great job Clayton. Well done! - Miss C.
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