Sunday, May 9, 2010

The Editing Challenge

Hi guys below I have written a paragraph which needs editing.
Your challenge is to identify and correct the paragraph finding as many errors as you can. Cut and paste the text and type the total number of errors that you have corrected underneath. There are 25 errors in total. Good Luck!

once apon a time their was a yung man named johnny johnny wanted to b a carpenter when he growed up but his mum wanted him 2 b a doctor. johnny always tried his Best and his mum was always very proud off him when johnny left year twelfe his mom realised that johnny should be allowed to do whatever he felt right for him. Johnny became such a great carpenter and eventually opened up his own bilding biziness. johnnys mum was so proud of him

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